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[story] aya (working title) #2a (supersedes #2)
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emmel
2008-07-23 12:14:21 UTC
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Just disregard #2 and read this one instead. It has everything #2 had
(with one little differce; I shuggeled Aya's age in here) plus
everything it should have had, but didn't because I got into a
post-it-now-frency. Read, have fun, comment. All three are compulsory.
#1 is now up on http://ranira.wordpress.com, BTW.
And before I forget it: Peace and carrots. If you don't know, why I put
it in here, you'll see. If you have and still don't get it, you might be
reading the wrong usenet group...

*****

'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
That settled it: Terminally stupid. Yes, this was the "Black
Hole", and yes, it was called like that, because they couldn't track
people's ID implants here, but no, that still left two good reasons
not to mug people.
'Look, I don't want trouble. Just let's forget this ever
happened, all right?'
Well, it was worth a shot. Ah, who was she trying to kid;
those guys lacked the brains for letting themselves being talked down.
She'd either have to give them what they wanted, run or make a stand.
Three thugs with knifes, against her, unarmed - it was clear who's
side the odds were on.
'I think you'll just give us everything you got, party girl.'
At that he started to snigger, as if he'd just made a
hilarious joke. The others joined in. Aya raised an eye brow. They had
to have taken some heavy drugs to find anything funny... about...
Their looks were quite unambiguous. What a bunch of perverts.
Not that she had ever considered giving them anything, but
this was just gross. Aya slightly shifted her position and tensed her
muscles; she was a lot faster than them.
'Come on, party gi...'
Aya lunged forwards. She jerking the man's knife hand forward,
painfully twisting it in the act, then planted her fist on his chest.
The rest of the sentence died on his lips, as the air was knocked from
his lungs. She treated the other two to a punch in the head and a kick
in the guts, respectively. Before they had even realized what had
happened, all three were already on the ground and wailing.
'I. Am. No. Party. Girl.' she growled at them, then, as a side
note, added:
'I have better things to do than going on a pub crawl.' She
collected their knifes from the ground and then scanned the bodies for
further ones. It was unlikely the men would capable to do anything
stupid soon, but why taking the risk? All she managed to produce,
however, were sounds of anguish whenever her hands touched a sore
spot.
Seriously, with such a low pain threshold they should have
stay at home, wrapped in cotton wool. There couldn't be more than a
couple of bruises, a few cracked rips, and maybe a slight concussion
in case of the one she'd hit in the head. Nothing life threatening;
not even any permanent damage to be expected.
In fact, she'd probably even done them a favour. Others might
not have felt that charitable, and with law enforcement off your back,
there was reason for restraint. You never knew who, or what, you'd run
across here - the first reason why mugging was a bad idea around those
parts.
The second reason had been watching the encounter from the
shadows, and Aya gave them a polite nod as she walked off. There were
about a dozen of them, armed mostly with clubs, but with the odd knife
in between. They weren't really keen on getting into a fight, she
knew, and thus were only too glad for her to handle this, but if she
hadn't brought those idiots down, they would have.
Allowing people to be harassed was bad for business; it
attracted the wrong kind of attention. Visitors would stay away,
hurting the legal dealings, and law would be forced to move in,
ruining the rest. This was their place and they'd make sure it stayed
that way.
A few minutes later Aya had reached her destination, a flight
of narrow stairs leading to an inconspicuous door, not different from
dozens of others she had passed. Old pictures showed flashy
advertising on street level and a huge luminescent arrow pointing at
the door, but the need of advertisement had gone long ago, and so had
the signs, once they had broken down for good. Word-of-mouth attracted
more clientele anyway, and added a fair deal to atmosphere.
She stepped through the door and into the ante chamber, a
small grey affair with doors at the both ends. The left wall sported a
breakthrough to the left, with the cloakroom counter fitted into it.
Aya pushed the hood of her sweater down and took off her glasses.
'Welcome back. Anything to check in?' the dark haired woman
behind the counter greeted her, in a business like tone, although her
eyes spoke a different language. Raia was a couple of years older than
her seventeen, Rain's adoptive daughter and, in truth, loved to chat.
Oh well, two could play the game.
Aya put her backpack on the counter, then pulled the
transportation cylinder out and placed it next it.
'Deposit. Rain.' she commented, pointing at the pack and the
cylinder, respectively. Then she pulled the knifes out, and, with an
as casual tone as she could manage, said:
'Get rid of these for me, will you?'
Raia's eyes widened. Got you.
'Tell me you didn't...'
Aya shook her head and gave her a bemused smile.
'Only a few kids playing mugger.'
'Phew. Don't do that to me ever again... Muggers? Do tell.'
'Later, I'm here on business.'
Aya gestured towards the cylinder. Raia nodded and then
stashed everything under the counter, and handed Aya a hooded, grey
cloak, the item the club had been named after in a fit of heightened
creativity. It smelled flowery.
'New conditioner?' she asked.
'Do you like it? Was a real bargain.'
'Smells nice.'
Raia looked pleased with herself.
'Yes, that's what I though. So, I'll see you later?'
'Always.'
Aya wrapped the cloak around her and entered the club proper.
Music emanated from the band in the back, drifting over the round
tables and mixing with the hushed conversations of the visitors, each
clad in an identical cloak. In combination with the dim light, it lent
the place a certain air of mystery, and people loved mystery. It was
one reason for the appeal of the club after anonymity.
The only one not to wear a cloak - or, as a matter of fact any
clothing at all - was Rain, the barkeeper, but he got away with it on
accounts of the greyish fur covering all his body and the fact that he
owned the place.
Aya took a seat at the bar. Instead of the traditional mirror
the back was occupied by a painting of the city skyline. It wasn't the
most exciting sight she could imagine, but it fitted the place. On the
more practical level it didn't reflect faces. After a few moments Rain
came over to.
'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
'So, the usual?'
Aya nodded. Rain disappeared a moment behind the counter. When
he came up again he had a big glass in his hand, filled with a
colourless liquid. He passed it to her and Aya took a swig. She almost
spew it right out again.
'Everything all right?' Rain asked.
So it hadn't escaped his attention. Who would have thought?
'That's water.' Aya complained.
'Beg your pardon?'
Rain reached below the counter and placed a bottle next to her
glass, gently tapping at label where it read 'Authentic Rilanehian
Spring Water'.
'Rain, that's water as in "water you can get from every tap".
The closest this', she pointed at the bottle, 'has ever come to a
Rilaneh is milliards of metres, if you catch my drift.'
'Oh. Are you definite?'
He rubbed `his head. Aya just nodded. It wasn't the first time
she had come across counterfeit bottles like these; if was far too
profitable not to be tried, and most people couldn't tell the
difference anyway. Someone ripping Rain off, on the other hand, was
something you didn't get very often. Sure, he didn't look very
threatening, not helped by the fact that he was only about half of her
size, but looks were irrelevant when you got his kind of connections.
Someone was going to pay for this, no doubt about that.
'Here, let me make it up.' he said, handing her glass with a
gleaming amber liquid inside. As she took it he added with an
enigmatic smile:
'From my special stock.'
Carefully, Aya sipped at it. Whoa. This had to be from a very
special stock indeed. Fruity flavours blended with earthy ones in a
perfect mix, creating a flavour that was simply incredible. There also
was a fair amount of alcohol involved.
'Good, isn't it?' Rain asked her with a pleased smile on his
face. He could read the answer in her face.
'Incredible.'
'So, anything else I can get you?'
'Well, one thing, maybe. Do you still offer anonymous net
access? There's some complaint I'd like to file.'
'About the water?'
Rain sounded confused.
'No, about a lift.'

Aya stared at her time piece, the numbers on the fluid display
continually melting into each other as time trickled by. Eight minutes
already. Eight annoying, boring and absolutely intolerable minutes.
The forty odd minutes before had passed in the blink of an
eye, compared to this. She had filed her complaint with the lift
company, caught up with the latest gossip from Rain, when he hadn't
had any other customers to tend to, and otherwise had had a nice time
sipping her drink and listening to the music. The band turned out to
be surprisingly good, even with the hood muffling sound, and Aya had
made a mental note to drop by sometime next week to enjoy them
properly.
Eight thirty. The waiting really got to her. Maybe she should
demand a little extra for this, although she couldn't see that going
terribly well. Payment had been agreed upon beforehand, as always, and
renegotiation would verge on blackmail. Besides this deal wasn't about
money.
If it was, she'd just let Rain handle it instead of sticking
around and waiting. Or, rather, she wouldn't have bothered at all.
Breaking into offices was child's play; at least when you didn't lock
yourself into the lift shaft. No, this deal was about something
entirely different. Invaluable - to her anyway, and still a lot more
than a job like this would normally fare for.
And it better had not be a rouse to get her to steal that
monstrosity. If it turned out that was the case, if she had stolen it
for nothing... Well, she didn't really know what she would do, but it
wasn't going to be pleasant.
Before Aya could think of any fitting revenge plans, however,
Rain came over and whispered:
'Your client has arrived.'
'About bloody time.' she muttered under her breath; by the
looks of it she would get paid after all.
Rain gave her a stern look, and then left her again. Right. No
talking, no glancing to the sides. Aya bit back a sigh. She knew she
ought to be grateful for the strict protocol, with her special need
for anonymity more so, but it still felt more like an archaic ritual
than anything else. Maybe she should ask Rain to sacrifice a chicken
or something next time. In fact she should ask him as soon as this was
over - she could do with a bite and chicken sounded just about
perfect.
Anyway, there was Rain again, giving her an indiscernible nod;
her client was satisfied with her work. Rain leaned over and pushed a
small cloth wrapped package towards her. Aya's heartbeat quickened as
she took it and carefully removed the cloth. It held a small,
delicately carved statuette of a woman, and it was simply beautiful.
Real art, not some modern junk, and old. She pulled her right glove
off and ran her fingers over the stone; she could feel the love and
dedication the that had flown into its making. An original no doubt.
She rewrapped the statuette and handed it back to Rain, then
nodded. That sealed the deal. Rain disappeared from her view once
more.
'Any more orders?' he asked when he came back after a minute
or two, signifying her that her client had left and giving her the
permission to speak again. He wasn't really expecting an answer, and
already turning away, but since he had asked...
'It's a bit late, but can you fix me some of your chicken?'
Rain turned back to her.
'For you? Any time.'
Aya smiled; that answer alone was worth his cut.

'How was the chicken?' Raia asked when Aya handed her the cloak. She
put it on a hanger and went to the back of the cloakroom.
'Fantastic, as always. I didn't realize you are monitoring
orders, though.'
She really was unsettling well informed sometimes.
'Only when I have to cook them. Well, heat up, really.' Raia
answered with a grin. She returned to the counter with Aya's things in
her arm - her backpack and the transportation cylinder as well as her
other, slightly larger backpack and coat, which she had left here in
the evening, before setting out on her business trip.
'Oh. It's only... I thought you were handling the cloakroom?'
'Come on, you know how father is; he'd rather burn the whole
place to the ground than letting me see his special customers. Had me
relieved me the second I brought him your latest', she did the air
quotes, '"acquisition". I only came back to see you out.'
'Hey, I am one of his special customers, too.' Aya complained,
resting her hands on her waist in a gesture of mock offence. She was
only half jesting, though, part was honest hurt pride. After all she
was a pro and not some wannabe.
'Don't give me that, Aya, you know what I mean. Of course, you
are one of his special customers, but you are also my friend. There's
no risk of you considering me a loose end to be tied up.'
An uneasy silence spread through the room. They both knew very
well Raia wasn't exaggerating; in the last two years three of Rain's
staff had been met a premature end. Accidents, of course, but that
served only to underline the graveness of it.
'So... Did you get that necklace you mentioned?' Raia finally
broke the silence. It was a blatant attempt at changing topic, but
she, at least, had managed to come up with another one.
'Pretty much. I've got an option on it, and unless someone is
willing to pay significantly more than me, there shouldn't be any
problem.'
Aya opened the large one of the backpacks. The pair of boots
it held, she exchanged for the ones she was wearing, then dumped
cylinder, boots and the other backpack inside.
'Separate boots? Don't you think, you are overdoing it?' Raia
asked when she was fastening the flaps of the backpack.
'Not really, they might compare boot prints or something and
I'd rather not have them find the front ones on my doorstep.' Aya
replied sincerely.
'You are paranoid, you know that?'
'Not as much as the ones who are after me.'
Aya grinned. Raia snickered. Before long both were laughing.
It just was one of these moments.
'You know, I have to get going if I want to catch some sleep
tonight.' Aya said, after they had calmed down again. She let her hair
down and put on her coat. At last, she slipped her hand into an inside
pocket and pulled a length of fine, golden chain out and fastened it
fastened around her neck, the delicately worked pendant coming to rest
on the skin of her cleavage. Goodbye Aya the thief, hello Aya the law
abiding citizen.
'Good bye, and don't let yourself get mugged.' Raia said,
grinning.
'Good night, Raia.'

It was in the wee hours of the morning, when Aya finally reached the
flat. She slammed the door shut behind her, kicked her boots off and
dropped coat, gloves and backpack heedlessly to the ground. Even if
she would have to clean everything up, it still felt great making a
mess for once in a while, and she didn't even have to worry getting
lectured for it - she was the only one around and this was her very
own way of shamelessly taking advantage of the fact.
Her shamelessness even extended so far, that she'd take a
bath; right now, in the middle of night. She went to the bathroom and
set the tap as hot as it would go, then added a generous amount of
additive, the water taking on an amber hue. Foam started to build
where the stream of water splashed down into the tub. Aya skimmed the
water with her fingers to test the temperature; perfect.
While the water was running, she continued to her room.
Pants, sweater and socks went in one of the two strategically placed
hampers - a desperate attempt to stop her from cluttering the floor
with her dirty clothes. Desperate, but successful, she had to admit.
Aya wriggled out of her 'business outfit' and dropped it onto the
floor. Well, most of the time anyway.
She closed her eyes for a moment and enjoyed the slight breeze
of the air conditioning brushing against her bare skin. It felt good;
a bit cool, maybe, but a pleasant change from the skin tight apparel
she had been wearing for hours. Even with the latest high-tech
fabrics, that always made her itchy.
In the meantime, the tub was full, and the taps automatically
closed; the sound of running water trickled off, and then there was
but silence. Aya opened her eyes again.
She was halfway to the bathroom, when she caught her refection
in the full length mirror in the hallway. Damn, she was still wearing
the necklace. It wasn't as if it would melt in the water, but there
was a good chance that if she didn't take it off now, she wouldn't
before going to bed, and in the morning she'd have to take the bed
apart in order to find it. It wouldn't be the first time.
Once she had put it in its usual place of honour on her
bedside table, Aya went to the bathroom and climbed into the tub. The
heat immediately welled up in her, driving sweat onto her skin, and
her muscles slackened. She leaned back and let her mind wander.
Had her mother taken off the necklace for bathing? She might
have, but Aya wasn't sure. It was so long ago, and she hadn't paid
much attention to it. The necklace was just there, something that her
mother always wore, a part of her. And after her mother had died it
had become a part of her. Even if she didn't have to, she wear it
every day.
She did, though. Aya, just like her mother and her mother's
mother and her mother's mother's mother and who knew how many before
them, suffered from a very unique condition, so unique, in fact, that
the doctors didn't even have a name for it. Implants just wouldn't
work, either not activating in the first place, or breaking down
within hours - including the ID implants afforded on every citizen,
shortly after birth. If they could have gotten away with it, they'd
probably rooted the problem out, but since that was not an option,
they had devised an external version of the chip. Hence the necklace.
Oh yes, she really suffered a lot from that. She suffered from
not being able to have any half brewed hardware inside her, and she
suffered from freedom. Others in the not-quite-legal line of business
had to go to great lengths to mask their ID or have it surgically
removed, effectively forcing them underground for as long as they
lived; all she had to do was taking off the necklace. What a terrible
fate for her to bear.

Sputtering, Aya woke up. She must have been fallen asleep in the
bathtub. Again. If she kept doing that, she was going to drown one of
these days. She could really do without that.
Aya climbed out of the tub and opened the drain. Shouldn't she
at least feel rested, when she put her life on line for a nap? As it
was, she could barely keep her eyes open. Aya wrapped her bathrobe
tightly around her and went to her room, slumping right away onto her
bed. The very next moment her breath became slow and steady; Aya was
sleeping the sleep of the just.
--
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2008-08-01 12:14:22 UTC
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emmel wrote:
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Post by emmel
'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'

The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Post by emmel
That settled it: Terminally stupid. Yes, this was the "Black
Hole", and yes, it was called like that, because they couldn't track
people's ID implants here, but no, that still left two good reasons
not to mug people.
'Look, I don't want trouble. Just let's forget this ever
happened, all right?'
Well, it was worth a shot. Ah, who was she trying to kid;
those guys lacked the brains for letting themselves being talked down.
She'd either have to give them what they wanted, run or make a stand.
Three thugs with knifes, against her, unarmed - it was clear who's
side the odds were on.
'I think you'll just give us everything you got, party girl.'
At that he started to snigger, as if he'd just made a
hilarious joke. The others joined in. Aya raised an eye brow. They had
to have taken some heavy drugs to find anything funny... about...
Their looks were quite unambiguous. What a bunch of perverts.
Not that she had ever considered giving them anything, but
this was just gross. Aya slightly shifted her position and tensed her
muscles; she was a lot faster than them.
'Come on, party gi...'
Aya lunged forwards. She jerking the man's knife hand forward,
painfully twisting it in the act, then planted her fist on his chest.
The rest of the sentence died on his lips, as the air was knocked from
his lungs. She treated the other two to a punch in the head and a kick
in the guts, respectively. Before they had even realized what had
happened, all three were already on the ground and wailing.
'I. Am. No. Party. Girl.' she growled at them, then, as a side
'Don't call me babe' - Pamela Anderson in Barb Wire.
Post by emmel
'I have better things to do than going on a pub crawl.' She
collected their knifes from the ground and then scanned the bodies for
further ones. It was unlikely the men would capable to do anything
stupid soon, but why taking the risk? All she managed to produce,
however, were sounds of anguish whenever her hands touched a sore
spot.
Seriously, with such a low pain threshold they should have
stay at home, wrapped in cotton wool. There couldn't be more than a
should have stayed.
Post by emmel
couple of bruises, a few cracked rips, and maybe a slight concussion
in case of the one she'd hit in the head. Nothing life threatening;
not even any permanent damage to be expected.
In fact, she'd probably even done them a favour. Others might
not have felt that charitable, and with law enforcement off your back,
there was reason for restraint. You never knew who, or what, you'd run
across here - the first reason why mugging was a bad idea around those
run into or come across :-)
Post by emmel
parts.
The second reason had been watching the encounter from the
shadows, and Aya gave them a polite nod as she walked off. There were
about a dozen of them, armed mostly with clubs, but with the odd knife
in between. They weren't really keen on getting into a fight, she
knew, and thus were only too glad for her to handle this, but if she
hadn't brought those idiots down, they would have.
Allowing people to be harassed was bad for business; it
attracted the wrong kind of attention. Visitors would stay away,
hurting the legal dealings, and law would be forced to move in,
ruining the rest. This was their place and they'd make sure it stayed
that way.
A few minutes later Aya had reached her destination, a flight
of narrow stairs leading to an inconspicuous door, not different from
dozens of others she had passed. Old pictures showed flashy
advertising on street level and a huge luminescent arrow pointing at
the door, but the need of advertisement had gone long ago, and so had
the signs, once they had broken down for good. Word-of-mouth attracted
more clientele anyway, and added a fair deal to atmosphere.
She stepped through the door and into the ante chamber, a
small grey affair with doors at the both ends. The left wall sported a
with doors at both ends.
Post by emmel
breakthrough to the left, with the cloakroom counter fitted into it.
Aya pushed the hood of her sweater down and took off her glasses.
'Welcome back. Anything to check in?' the dark haired woman
behind the counter greeted her, in a business like tone, although her
eyes spoke a different language. Raia was a couple of years older than
her seventeen, Rain's adoptive daughter and, in truth, loved to chat.
Oh well, two could play the game.
Aya put her backpack on the counter, then pulled the
transportation cylinder out and placed it next it.
'Deposit. Rain.' she commented, pointing at the pack and the
cylinder, respectively. Then she pulled the knifes out, and, with an
'Get rid of these for me, will you?'
Raia's eyes widened. Got you.
'Tell me you didn't...'
Aya shook her head and gave her a bemused smile.
'Only a few kids playing mugger.'
'Phew. Don't do that to me ever again... Muggers? Do tell.'
'Later, I'm here on business.'
Aya gestured towards the cylinder. Raia nodded and then
stashed everything under the counter, and handed Aya a hooded, grey
cloak, the item the club had been named after in a fit of heightened
creativity. It smelled flowery.
'New conditioner?' she asked.
'Do you like it? Was a real bargain.'
'Smells nice.'
Raia looked pleased with herself.
'Yes, that's what I though. So, I'll see you later?'
that is what I thought.
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'Always.'
Aya wrapped the cloak around her and entered the club proper.
entered the club properly.
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Music emanated from the band in the back, drifting over the round
tables and mixing with the hushed conversations of the visitors, each
clad in an identical cloak. In combination with the dim light, it lent
the place a certain air of mystery, and people loved mystery. It was
one reason for the appeal of the club after anonymity.
The only one not to wear a cloak - or, as a matter of fact any
clothing at all - was Rain, the barkeeper, but he got away with it on
accounts of the greyish fur covering all his body and the fact that he
owned the place.
Aya took a seat at the bar. Instead of the traditional mirror
the back was occupied by a painting of the city skyline. It wasn't the
most exciting sight she could imagine, but it fitted the place. On the
more practical level it didn't reflect faces. After a few moments Rain
came over to.
came over too.
Post by emmel
'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
'So, the usual?'
Aya nodded. Rain disappeared a moment behind the counter. When
disappeared for a moment below his counter.

behind the counter can be standing up also :-)
Post by emmel
he came up again he had a big glass in his hand, filled with a
colourless liquid. He passed it to her and Aya took a swig. She almost
spew it right out again.
'Everything all right?' Rain asked.
So it hadn't escaped his attention. Who would have thought?
'That's water.' Aya complained.
'Beg your pardon?'
Rain reached below the counter and placed a bottle next to her
glass, gently tapping at label where it read 'Authentic Rilanehian
Spring Water'.
'Rain, that's water as in "water you can get from every tap".
The closest this', she pointed at the bottle, 'has ever come to a
Rilaneh is milliards of metres, if you catch my drift.'
'Oh. Are you definite?'
He rubbed `his head. Aya just nodded. It wasn't the first time
she had come across counterfeit bottles like these; if was far too
profitable not to be tried, and most people couldn't tell the
difference anyway. Someone ripping Rain off, on the other hand, was
something you didn't get very often. Sure, he didn't look very
threatening, not helped by the fact that he was only about half of her
size, but looks were irrelevant when you got his kind of connections.
Someone was going to pay for this, no doubt about that.
'Here, let me make it up.' he said, handing her glass with a
gleaming amber liquid inside. As she took it he added with an
'From my special stock.'
Carefully, Aya sipped at it. Whoa. This had to be from a very
special stock indeed. Fruity flavours blended with earthy ones in a
perfect mix, creating a flavour that was simply incredible. There also
was a fair amount of alcohol involved.
'Good, isn't it?' Rain asked her with a pleased smile on his
face. He could read the answer in her face.
'Incredible.'
'So, anything else I can get you?'
'Well, one thing, maybe. Do you still offer anonymous net
access? There's some complaint I'd like to file.'
Interesting. Do they still use The Onion Router at this time in the future?

Best is just to hack into someone's wifi, something Aya seems very
capable of :-)
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'About the water?'
Rain sounded confused.
'No, about a lift.'
Aya stared at her time piece, the numbers on the fluid display
continually melting into each other as time trickled by. Eight minutes
already. Eight annoying, boring and absolutely intolerable minutes.
The forty odd minutes before had passed in the blink of an
eye, compared to this. She had filed her complaint with the lift
company, caught up with the latest gossip from Rain, when he hadn't
had any other customers to tend to, and otherwise had had a nice time
sipping her drink and listening to the music. The band turned out to
be surprisingly good, even with the hood muffling sound, and Aya had
made a mental note to drop by sometime next week to enjoy them
properly.
Eight thirty. The waiting really got to her. Maybe she should
demand a little extra for this, although she couldn't see that going
terribly well. Payment had been agreed upon beforehand, as always, and
renegotiation would verge on blackmail. Besides this deal wasn't about
money.
If it was, she'd just let Rain handle it instead of sticking
around and waiting. Or, rather, she wouldn't have bothered at all.
Breaking into offices was child's play; at least when you didn't lock
yourself into the lift shaft. No, this deal was about something
entirely different. Invaluable - to her anyway, and still a lot more
than a job like this would normally fare for.
And it better had not be a rouse to get her to steal that
monstrosity. If it turned out that was the case, if she had stolen it
for nothing... Well, she didn't really know what she would do, but it
wasn't going to be pleasant.
Before Aya could think of any fitting revenge plans, however,
'Your client has arrived.'
'About bloody time.' she muttered under her breath; by the
looks of it she would get paid after all.
Rain gave her a stern look, and then left her again. Right. No
talking, no glancing to the sides. Aya bit back a sigh. She knew she
ought to be grateful for the strict protocol, with her special need
for anonymity more so, but it still felt more like an archaic ritual
than anything else. Maybe she should ask Rain to sacrifice a chicken
or something next time. In fact she should ask him as soon as this was
over - she could do with a bite and chicken sounded just about
perfect.
Anyway, there was Rain again, giving her an indiscernible nod;
her client was satisfied with her work. Rain leaned over and pushed a
small cloth wrapped package towards her. Aya's heartbeat quickened as
she took it and carefully removed the cloth. It held a small,
delicately carved statuette of a woman, and it was simply beautiful.
Real art, not some modern junk, and old. She pulled her right glove
off and ran her fingers over the stone; she could feel the love and
dedication the that had flown into its making. An original no doubt.
She rewrapped the statuette and handed it back to Rain, then
nodded. That sealed the deal. Rain disappeared from her view once
more.
'Any more orders?' he asked when he came back after a minute
or two, signifying her that her client had left and giving her the
permission to speak again. He wasn't really expecting an answer, and
already turning away, but since he had asked...
'It's a bit late, but can you fix me some of your chicken?'
Rain turned back to her.
'For you? Any time.'
Aya smiled; that answer alone was worth his cut.
'How was the chicken?' Raia asked when Aya handed her the cloak. She
put it on a hanger and went to the back of the cloakroom.
'Fantastic, as always. I didn't realize you are monitoring
orders, though.'
She really was unsettling well informed sometimes.
'Only when I have to cook them. Well, heat up, really.' Raia
answered with a grin. She returned to the counter with Aya's things in
her arm - her backpack and the transportation cylinder as well as her
other, slightly larger backpack and coat, which she had left here in
the evening, before setting out on her business trip.
'Oh. It's only... I thought you were handling the cloakroom?'
'Come on, you know how father is; he'd rather burn the whole
place to the ground than letting me see his special customers. Had me
relieved me the second I brought him your latest', she did the air
quotes, '"acquisition". I only came back to see you out.'
'Hey, I am one of his special customers, too.' Aya complained,
resting her hands on her waist in a gesture of mock offence. She was
only half jesting, though, part was honest hurt pride. After all she
was a pro and not some wannabe.
'Don't give me that, Aya, you know what I mean. Of course, you
are one of his special customers, but you are also my friend. There's
no risk of you considering me a loose end to be tied up.'
An uneasy silence spread through the room. They both knew very
well Raia wasn't exaggerating; in the last two years three of Rain's
staff had been met a premature end. Accidents, of course, but that
served only to underline the graveness of it.
'So... Did you get that necklace you mentioned?' Raia finally
broke the silence. It was a blatant attempt at changing topic, but
she, at least, had managed to come up with another one.
'Pretty much. I've got an option on it, and unless someone is
willing to pay significantly more than me, there shouldn't be any
problem.'
Aya opened the large one of the backpacks. The pair of boots
it held, she exchanged for the ones she was wearing, then dumped
cylinder, boots and the other backpack inside.
'Separate boots? Don't you think, you are overdoing it?' Raia
asked when she was fastening the flaps of the backpack.
'Not really, they might compare boot prints or something and
I'd rather not have them find the front ones on my doorstep.' Aya
replied sincerely.
'You are paranoid, you know that?'
'Not as much as the ones who are after me.'
Aya grinned. Raia snickered. Before long both were laughing.
It just was one of these moments.
'You know, I have to get going if I want to catch some sleep
tonight.' Aya said, after they had calmed down again. She let her hair
down and put on her coat. At last, she slipped her hand into an inside
pocket and pulled a length of fine, golden chain out and fastened it
fastened around her neck, the delicately worked pendant coming to rest
on the skin of her cleavage. Goodbye Aya the thief, hello Aya the law
abiding citizen.
'Good bye, and don't let yourself get mugged.' Raia said,
grinning.
'Good night, Raia.'
It was in the wee hours of the morning, when Aya finally reached the
It was in the wee hours of the morning that Aya finally..
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flat. She slammed the door shut behind her, kicked her boots off and
dropped coat, gloves and backpack heedlessly to the ground. Even if
she would have to clean everything up, it still felt great making a
mess for once in a while, and she didn't even have to worry getting
worry about getting lectured.
Post by emmel
lectured for it - she was the only one around and this was her very
own way of shamelessly taking advantage of the fact.
her very own way of shamelessly taking advantage of that fact.
Post by emmel
Her shamelessness even extended so far, that she'd take a
bath; right now, in the middle of night. She went to the bathroom and
set the tap as hot as it would go, then added a generous amount of
additive, the water taking on an amber hue. Foam started to build
where the stream of water splashed down into the tub. Aya skimmed the
water with her fingers to test the temperature; perfect.
While the water was running, she continued to her room.
Pants, sweater and socks went in one of the two strategically placed
hampers - a desperate attempt to stop her from cluttering the floor
with her dirty clothes. Desperate, but successful, she had to admit.
Aya wriggled out of her 'business outfit' and dropped it onto the
floor. Well, most of the time anyway.
She closed her eyes for a moment and enjoyed the slight breeze
of the air conditioning brushing against her bare skin. It felt good;
a bit cool, maybe, but a pleasant change from the skin tight apparel
she had been wearing for hours. Even with the latest high-tech
fabrics, that always made her itchy.
In the meantime, the tub was full, and the taps automatically
closed; the sound of running water trickled off, and then there was
but silence. Aya opened her eyes again.
and there there was nothing but silence.
Post by emmel
She was halfway to the bathroom, when she caught her refection
in the full length mirror in the hallway. Damn, she was still wearing
the necklace. It wasn't as if it would melt in the water, but there
was a good chance that if she didn't take it off now, she wouldn't
before going to bed, and in the morning she'd have to take the bed
apart in order to find it. It wouldn't be the first time.
Once she had put it in its usual place of honour on her
bedside table, Aya went to the bathroom and climbed into the tub. The
heat immediately welled up in her, driving sweat onto her skin, and
her muscles slackened. She leaned back and let her mind wander.
Had her mother taken off the necklace for bathing? She might
have, but Aya wasn't sure. It was so long ago, and she hadn't paid
much attention to it. The necklace was just there, something that her
mother always wore, a part of her. And after her mother had died it
had become a part of her. Even if she didn't have to, she wear it
every day.
she wore it every day.
Post by emmel
She did, though. Aya, just like her mother and her mother's
mother and her mother's mother's mother and who knew how many before
them, suffered from a very unique condition, so unique, in fact, that
the doctors didn't even have a name for it. Implants just wouldn't
work, either not activating in the first place, or breaking down
within hours - including the ID implants afforded on every citizen,
ID implants forced on every citizen.
Post by emmel
shortly after birth. If they could have gotten away with it, they'd
probably rooted the problem out, but since that was not an option,
they had devised an external version of the chip. Hence the necklace.
Oh yes, she really suffered a lot from that. She suffered from
not being able to have any half brewed hardware inside her, and she
suffered from freedom. Others in the not-quite-legal line of business
had to go to great lengths to mask their ID or have it surgically
removed, effectively forcing them underground for as long as they
lived; all she had to do was taking off the necklace. What a terrible
fate for her to bear.
all she had to do was take off the necklace.
Post by emmel
Sputtering, Aya woke up. She must have been fallen asleep in the
bathtub. Again. If she kept doing that, she was going to drown one of
these days. She could really do without that.
Aya climbed out of the tub and opened the drain. Shouldn't she
at least feel rested, when she put her life on line for a nap? As it
was, she could barely keep her eyes open. Aya wrapped her bathrobe
tightly around her and went to her room, slumping right away onto her
bed. The very next moment her breath became slow and steady; Aya was
sleeping the sleep of the just.
She will wake up on a wet pillow if she doesn't put a towel around her
head or put a towel around her pillow first :-/

Neo
--
Everything that has a beginning has an end.
Neo
2008-08-01 13:32:18 UTC
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'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.

In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.

The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.

Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.

The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.

Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.

The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.

Neo
--
Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-02 07:38:30 UTC
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<snip>
Post by emmel
'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
--
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Neo
2008-08-04 10:19:12 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-01, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by Neo
<snip>
Post by emmel
'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)

And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]

Neo
--
Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-04 13:24:03 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-01, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by Neo
<snip>
Post by emmel
'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)
Let's see... a couple of bruises in my writing versus slashing in
yours... I can't quite see your point.
Post by Neo
And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
--
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2008-08-04 22:57:04 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-04, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-01, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by Neo
<snip>
Post by emmel
'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)
Let's see... a couple of bruises in my writing versus slashing in
yours... I can't quite see your point.
Post by Neo
And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
Are you saying movies have been lying to me? :)
emmel
2008-08-05 14:10:22 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-04, illusion
Post by Neo
And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
Are you saying movies have been lying to me? :)
No, they have just been trating you as if you were stupid. It's their
job after all.
--
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Neo
2008-08-05 19:03:58 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-04, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-01, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by Neo
<snip>
Post by emmel
'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)
Let's see... a couple of bruises in my writing versus slashing in
yours... I can't quite see your point.
I don't know how long a sliced upper arm muzzle takes to heal, but I
always say, bring a weapon and prepare to have it used against you :-)
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
My scenario showed how to deal with three attackers at the same time. It
didn't use a lot of force (not always present in a woman like Aya) and
about staying in control; you improvise.

The moves I wrote down where thought up by Aya in the time that their
conversation took place. She knew how to deal with the first one and
moved from there.

It doesn't matter what belt you get, fighting has to become second
nature. You change and adapt during the fight. And that is why Japanese
martial art movies are so much better than the roundabout kick by Chuck
Norris.

Bruce Lee would pwn Cluck Norris :-)

Neo
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Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-06 12:20:35 UTC
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'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)
Let's see... a couple of bruises in my writing versus slashing in
yours... I can't quite see your point.
I don't know how long a sliced upper arm muzzle takes to heal, but I
always say, bring a weapon and prepare to have it used against you :-)
Yes, but why shed blood when it's not necessary?
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And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
My scenario showed how to deal with three attackers at the same time. It
didn't use a lot of force (not always present in a woman like Aya) and
about staying in control; you improvise.
I improvise? Well, I guess there's no way around that when writing
fiction.
Post by Neo
The moves I wrote down where thought up by Aya in the time that their
conversation took place. She knew how to deal with the first one and
moved from there.
Hm... I don't think planning is really the way to go here. More like
routine and instincs as far as Aya is concerned.
Post by Neo
It doesn't matter what belt you get, fighting has to become second
nature. You change and adapt during the fight. And that is why Japanese
martial art movies are so much better than the roundabout kick by Chuck
Norris.
I'm not sure I really see your problem with what I wrote...
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2008-08-06 12:31:50 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-05, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-04, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
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'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)
Let's see... a couple of bruises in my writing versus slashing in
yours... I can't quite see your point.
I don't know how long a sliced upper arm muzzle takes to heal, but I
always say, bring a weapon and prepare to have it used against you :-)
Yes, but why shed blood when it's not necessary?
You let Aya nearly destroy the third thug that is running away; I make
an example of the second one :-)
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
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And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
My scenario showed how to deal with three attackers at the same time. It
didn't use a lot of force (not always present in a woman like Aya) and
about staying in control; you improvise.
I improvise? Well, I guess there's no way around that when writing
fiction.
Granted!
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
The moves I wrote down where thought up by Aya in the time that their
conversation took place. She knew how to deal with the first one and
moved from there.
Hm... I don't think planning is really the way to go here. More like
routine and instincs as far as Aya is concerned.
Instincts are good. They keep you alive when there is danger. They hint
you in when someone is lying.
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Post by Neo
It doesn't matter what belt you get, fighting has to become second
nature. You change and adapt during the fight. And that is why Japanese
martial art movies are so much better than the roundabout kick by Chuck
Norris.
I'm not sure I really see your problem with what I wrote...
I am not sure I do either ;-)

What Chuck Norris is doing (I presume) is using the same technique over
and over again. Instead of kicking as hard as possible, he shows how
high he can kick in an almost girlie way. Make sure Aya doesn't become
the beloved wife of anyone called Chuck Norris!

Neo
--
Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-06 15:25:28 UTC
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-05, illusion
Post by Neo
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And when it was 2008-08-04, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)
Let's see... a couple of bruises in my writing versus slashing in
yours... I can't quite see your point.
I don't know how long a sliced upper arm muzzle takes to heal, but I
always say, bring a weapon and prepare to have it used against you :-)
Yes, but why shed blood when it's not necessary?
You let Aya nearly destroy the third thug that is running away; I make
an example of the second one :-)
Nearly destroy? How that?
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Post by emmel
Post by Neo
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Post by Neo
And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
My scenario showed how to deal with three attackers at the same time. It
didn't use a lot of force (not always present in a woman like Aya) and
about staying in control; you improvise.
I improvise? Well, I guess there's no way around that when writing
fiction.
Granted!
Puh, glad that still counts for something.
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
The moves I wrote down where thought up by Aya in the time that their
conversation took place. She knew how to deal with the first one and
moved from there.
Hm... I don't think planning is really the way to go here. More like
routine and instincs as far as Aya is concerned.
Instincts are good. They keep you alive when there is danger. They hint
you in when someone is lying.
Well, I should hope so.
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Post by emmel
Post by Neo
It doesn't matter what belt you get, fighting has to become second
nature. You change and adapt during the fight. And that is why Japanese
martial art movies are so much better than the roundabout kick by Chuck
Norris.
I'm not sure I really see your problem with what I wrote...
I am not sure I do either ;-)
Oh, well, that's all right then.
Post by Neo
What Chuck Norris is doing (I presume) is using the same technique over
and over again. Instead of kicking as hard as possible, he shows how
high he can kick in an almost girlie way. Make sure Aya doesn't become
the beloved wife of anyone called Chuck Norris!
She is trained to a) incapacitate without killing b) kill if necessary
and c) run the hell when the odds are unfavourable. The classic
stay-alive training.
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2008-08-07 09:57:17 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-06, illusion
Post by Neo
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And when it was 2008-08-05, illusion
Post by Neo
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And when it was 2008-08-04, illusion
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'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
Aya didn't hesitate.
In one swift motion she was next to the right most thug. Out of reach of
the knives of the other two.
The right most thug tried to stab her, only to find out his right hand
couldn't reach to where she was added to this that his stab was
underpowered.
Aya grabbed his wrist and twisted it, revealing the knife, then in one
forceful motion she forced him the the ground, dropping the knife
between them. She picked up the knife.
The middle thug made it to her location and began to stab too.
Aya, now armed with a knife grabbed his stabbing arm with her free hand
pulled it close enough to cut his upper arm. He wouldn't be stabbing
anyone soon.
The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)
Let's see... a couple of bruises in my writing versus slashing in
yours... I can't quite see your point.
I don't know how long a sliced upper arm muzzle takes to heal, but I
always say, bring a weapon and prepare to have it used against you :-)
Yes, but why shed blood when it's not necessary?
You let Aya nearly destroy the third thug that is running away; I make
an example of the second one :-)
Nearly destroy? How that?
The three thugs are still trying to enter the state where they figure
out what they did wrong. They feel like they were nearly destroyed but
they know that does not compute. Ouch! That broken rib hurts! I think
part of the bone is trying to get through the flesh :-)
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
My scenario showed how to deal with three attackers at the same time. It
didn't use a lot of force (not always present in a woman like Aya) and
about staying in control; you improvise.
I improvise? Well, I guess there's no way around that when writing
fiction.
Granted!
Puh, glad that still counts for something.
If you have it all thought out and know where the story is going to end,
one might call it otherwise.
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
The moves I wrote down where thought up by Aya in the time that their
conversation took place. She knew how to deal with the first one and
moved from there.
Hm... I don't think planning is really the way to go here. More like
routine and instincs as far as Aya is concerned.
Instincts are good. They keep you alive when there is danger. They hint
you in when someone is lying.
Well, I should hope so.
Problem with some people in the world is that they can't be sure where
those instincts come from and if they are telling the truth!
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
It doesn't matter what belt you get, fighting has to become second
nature. You change and adapt during the fight. And that is why Japanese
martial art movies are so much better than the roundabout kick by Chuck
Norris.
I'm not sure I really see your problem with what I wrote...
I am not sure I do either ;-)
Oh, well, that's all right then.
Post by Neo
What Chuck Norris is doing (I presume) is using the same technique over
and over again. Instead of kicking as hard as possible, he shows how
high he can kick in an almost girlie way. Make sure Aya doesn't become
the beloved wife of anyone called Chuck Norris!
She is trained to a) incapacitate without killing b) kill if necessary
and c) run the hell when the odds are unfavourable. The classic
stay-alive training.
In my martial arts training I was told to do 1) as much possible damage
2) with the least amount of effort 3) in the shortest possible amount of
time.

If your target was lucky enough to be in a clearly uneven match 1) and
3) might be waived.

Neo
--
Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-07 17:54:08 UTC
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The third, paralyzed by fear, dropped his knife, made a quick turn and
ran of into the distance.
You like writing fight scenes, don't you. But that isn't Aya's style.
Her advantage is speed and reflaxes, acting before them. Giving them a
chance to try stabbing her would be very... undesired. And letting
anyone run away more so.
You don't like fighting, yet you inflict more damage on the thugs than I
did :-)
Let's see... a couple of bruises in my writing versus slashing in
yours... I can't quite see your point.
I don't know how long a sliced upper arm muzzle takes to heal, but I
always say, bring a weapon and prepare to have it used against you :-)
Yes, but why shed blood when it's not necessary?
You let Aya nearly destroy the third thug that is running away; I make
an example of the second one :-)
Nearly destroy? How that?
The three thugs are still trying to enter the state where they figure
out what they did wrong. They feel like they were nearly destroyed but
they know that does not compute. Ouch! That broken rib hurts! I think
part of the bone is trying to get through the flesh :-)
I'm pretty sure I wrote cracked and not broken. Painful, but besides
that...
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
And reflexes is all you need to move a knife stab elsewhere. Just don't
try to grab the knife and you'll be fine. I have done this hundreds of
times in the gym ;-) [Though those were wooden knives]
It's better not to have to deflect anything, though. You can't fight
three at once and stay in control, at least not reliably.
My scenario showed how to deal with three attackers at the same time. It
didn't use a lot of force (not always present in a woman like Aya) and
about staying in control; you improvise.
I improvise? Well, I guess there's no way around that when writing
fiction.
Granted!
Puh, glad that still counts for something.
If you have it all thought out and know where the story is going to end,
one might call it otherwise.
Well, maybe. Even if you have the whole thing outlined, plenty of detail
find their way into the text when you are actually writing. I can't
imagine a possibility of working differently.
And I have a couple of things outlined, although not everything and not
in fine detail. Still, there's enough for me to probably run a question
and answer session onit.
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Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
The moves I wrote down where thought up by Aya in the time that their
conversation took place. She knew how to deal with the first one and
moved from there.
Hm... I don't think planning is really the way to go here. More like
routine and instincs as far as Aya is concerned.
Instincts are good. They keep you alive when there is danger. They hint
you in when someone is lying.
Well, I should hope so.
Problem with some people in the world is that they can't be sure where
those instincts come from and if they are telling the truth!
::shrugs::
Anyway, I think Aya is pretty good at listening to her instincts. Most
of the time. Hopefully. And with a bit of luck. ;-)
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Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
It doesn't matter what belt you get, fighting has to become second
nature. You change and adapt during the fight. And that is why Japanese
martial art movies are so much better than the roundabout kick by Chuck
Norris.
I'm not sure I really see your problem with what I wrote...
I am not sure I do either ;-)
Oh, well, that's all right then.
Post by Neo
What Chuck Norris is doing (I presume) is using the same technique over
and over again. Instead of kicking as hard as possible, he shows how
high he can kick in an almost girlie way. Make sure Aya doesn't become
the beloved wife of anyone called Chuck Norris!
She is trained to a) incapacitate without killing b) kill if necessary
and c) run the hell when the odds are unfavourable. The classic
stay-alive training.
In my martial arts training I was told to do 1) as much possible damage
Well, there's a very good reason why her training differs in this point.
Besides, it's neither classical martial arts (which tend to have strong
ties to philosophy) nor self defense training (well, that was the basic
idea, but she got to the completely wrong place for that). And that's
all I want to say about that at the moment. Spoilers and stuff; you'll
see.
Post by Neo
2) with the least amount of effort 3) in the shortest possible amount of
time.
Well, those two are still in effect.
Post by Neo
If your target was lucky enough to be in a clearly uneven match 1) and
3) might be waived.
That pretty much was the case here, although Aya prefers 3) over 2) most
of the time.
--
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2008-08-02 07:35:48 UTC
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Post by Neo
<snip>
Post by emmel
'Lost, party girl?'
Terrific; this just had to be her lucky night. Somehow she had
managed to find three out of a total... one, two, three thugs in the
whole of the city, at the last count. Were they merely clueless or
completely stupid?
'Do you have any idea what happens to muggers in this city?'
By their look, they were surprised she had recognized them for what
they were. One point in favour of clueless.
'You are a clever one, party girl. I can tell. I like clever
girls. But you are in the black hole, here. No police watching us.'
'So aren't you scared?' she asked the thug. 'Bad things could happen to
a mugger late at night'
The mugger hesitated, then firmly asserted 'Just give us everything you
got, party girl, and maybe, just maybe, you will make it out of here
unharmed'
I don't think that would fit her. She can't really pull off scary, at
least not in a situation like this, and she *is* trying to be nice about
it.
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Post by emmel
That settled it: Terminally stupid. Yes, this was the "Black
Hole", and yes, it was called like that, because they couldn't track
people's ID implants here, but no, that still left two good reasons
not to mug people.
'Look, I don't want trouble. Just let's forget this ever
happened, all right?'
Well, it was worth a shot. Ah, who was she trying to kid;
those guys lacked the brains for letting themselves being talked down.
She'd either have to give them what they wanted, run or make a stand.
Three thugs with knifes, against her, unarmed - it was clear who's
side the odds were on.
'I think you'll just give us everything you got, party girl.'
At that he started to snigger, as if he'd just made a
hilarious joke. The others joined in. Aya raised an eye brow. They had
to have taken some heavy drugs to find anything funny... about...
Their looks were quite unambiguous. What a bunch of perverts.
Not that she had ever considered giving them anything, but
this was just gross. Aya slightly shifted her position and tensed her
muscles; she was a lot faster than them.
'Come on, party gi...'
Aya lunged forwards. She jerking the man's knife hand forward,
painfully twisting it in the act, then planted her fist on his chest.
The rest of the sentence died on his lips, as the air was knocked from
his lungs. She treated the other two to a punch in the head and a kick
in the guts, respectively. Before they had even realized what had
happened, all three were already on the ground and wailing.
'I. Am. No. Party. Girl.' she growled at them, then, as a side
'Don't call me babe' - Pamela Anderson in Barb Wire.
Haven't seen it.
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Post by emmel
'I have better things to do than going on a pub crawl.' She
collected their knifes from the ground and then scanned the bodies for
further ones. It was unlikely the men would capable to do anything
stupid soon, but why taking the risk? All she managed to produce,
however, were sounds of anguish whenever her hands touched a sore
spot.
Seriously, with such a low pain threshold they should have
stay at home, wrapped in cotton wool. There couldn't be more than a
should have stayed.
Post by emmel
couple of bruises, a few cracked rips, and maybe a slight concussion
in case of the one she'd hit in the head. Nothing life threatening;
not even any permanent damage to be expected.
In fact, she'd probably even done them a favour. Others might
not have felt that charitable, and with law enforcement off your back,
there was reason for restraint. You never knew who, or what, you'd run
across here - the first reason why mugging was a bad idea around those
run into or come across :-)
Hm... what was I thinking?
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
parts.
The second reason had been watching the encounter from the
shadows, and Aya gave them a polite nod as she walked off. There were
about a dozen of them, armed mostly with clubs, but with the odd knife
in between. They weren't really keen on getting into a fight, she
knew, and thus were only too glad for her to handle this, but if she
hadn't brought those idiots down, they would have.
Allowing people to be harassed was bad for business; it
attracted the wrong kind of attention. Visitors would stay away,
hurting the legal dealings, and law would be forced to move in,
ruining the rest. This was their place and they'd make sure it stayed
that way.
A few minutes later Aya had reached her destination, a flight
of narrow stairs leading to an inconspicuous door, not different from
dozens of others she had passed. Old pictures showed flashy
advertising on street level and a huge luminescent arrow pointing at
the door, but the need of advertisement had gone long ago, and so had
the signs, once they had broken down for good. Word-of-mouth attracted
more clientele anyway, and added a fair deal to atmosphere.
She stepped through the door and into the ante chamber, a
small grey affair with doors at the both ends. The left wall sported a
with doors at both ends.
Um, yes.
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breakthrough to the left, with the cloakroom counter fitted into it.
Aya pushed the hood of her sweater down and took off her glasses.
'Welcome back. Anything to check in?' the dark haired woman
behind the counter greeted her, in a business like tone, although her
eyes spoke a different language. Raia was a couple of years older than
her seventeen, Rain's adoptive daughter and, in truth, loved to chat.
Oh well, two could play the game.
Aya put her backpack on the counter, then pulled the
transportation cylinder out and placed it next it.
'Deposit. Rain.' she commented, pointing at the pack and the
cylinder, respectively. Then she pulled the knifes out, and, with an
'Get rid of these for me, will you?'
Raia's eyes widened. Got you.
'Tell me you didn't...'
Aya shook her head and gave her a bemused smile.
'Only a few kids playing mugger.'
'Phew. Don't do that to me ever again... Muggers? Do tell.'
'Later, I'm here on business.'
Aya gestured towards the cylinder. Raia nodded and then
stashed everything under the counter, and handed Aya a hooded, grey
cloak, the item the club had been named after in a fit of heightened
creativity. It smelled flowery.
'New conditioner?' she asked.
'Do you like it? Was a real bargain.'
'Smells nice.'
Raia looked pleased with herself.
'Yes, that's what I though. So, I'll see you later?'
that is what I thought.
Oops.
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'Always.'
Aya wrapped the cloak around her and entered the club proper.
entered the club properly.
Erm, no. The 'club proper' as in the 'actual club'. Besides, 'properly'
would make no sense here.
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Music emanated from the band in the back, drifting over the round
tables and mixing with the hushed conversations of the visitors, each
clad in an identical cloak. In combination with the dim light, it lent
the place a certain air of mystery, and people loved mystery. It was
one reason for the appeal of the club after anonymity.
The only one not to wear a cloak - or, as a matter of fact any
clothing at all - was Rain, the barkeeper, but he got away with it on
accounts of the greyish fur covering all his body and the fact that he
owned the place.
Aya took a seat at the bar. Instead of the traditional mirror
the back was occupied by a painting of the city skyline. It wasn't the
most exciting sight she could imagine, but it fitted the place. On the
more practical level it didn't reflect faces. After a few moments Rain
came over to.
came over too.
'came over to her'
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
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'So, the usual?'
Aya nodded. Rain disappeared a moment behind the counter. When
disappeared for a moment below his counter.
behind the counter can be standing up also :-)
Hm... 'under', I think.
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he came up again he had a big glass in his hand, filled with a
colourless liquid. He passed it to her and Aya took a swig. She almost
spew it right out again.
'Everything all right?' Rain asked.
So it hadn't escaped his attention. Who would have thought?
'That's water.' Aya complained.
'Beg your pardon?'
Rain reached below the counter and placed a bottle next to her
glass, gently tapping at label where it read 'Authentic Rilanehian
Spring Water'.
'Rain, that's water as in "water you can get from every tap".
The closest this', she pointed at the bottle, 'has ever come to a
Rilaneh is milliards of metres, if you catch my drift.'
'Oh. Are you definite?'
He rubbed `his head. Aya just nodded. It wasn't the first time
she had come across counterfeit bottles like these; if was far too
profitable not to be tried, and most people couldn't tell the
difference anyway. Someone ripping Rain off, on the other hand, was
something you didn't get very often. Sure, he didn't look very
threatening, not helped by the fact that he was only about half of her
size, but looks were irrelevant when you got his kind of connections.
Someone was going to pay for this, no doubt about that.
'Here, let me make it up.' he said, handing her glass with a
gleaming amber liquid inside. As she took it he added with an
'From my special stock.'
Carefully, Aya sipped at it. Whoa. This had to be from a very
special stock indeed. Fruity flavours blended with earthy ones in a
perfect mix, creating a flavour that was simply incredible. There also
was a fair amount of alcohol involved.
'Good, isn't it?' Rain asked her with a pleased smile on his
face. He could read the answer in her face.
'Incredible.'
'So, anything else I can get you?'
'Well, one thing, maybe. Do you still offer anonymous net
access? There's some complaint I'd like to file.'
Interesting. Do they still use The Onion Router at this time in the future?
Maybe, maybe not. I think Rain uses something like a tap into the
backbone.
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Best is just to hack into someone's wifi, something Aya seems very
capable of :-)
I don't think there are any wireless networks beside the general data
network used for phones and the like. Strictly secured and tied to
personal accounts...

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It was in the wee hours of the morning, when Aya finally reached the
It was in the wee hours of the morning that Aya finally..
'that'?! I don't think I like the sound of that.
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flat. She slammed the door shut behind her, kicked her boots off and
dropped coat, gloves and backpack heedlessly to the ground. Even if
she would have to clean everything up, it still felt great making a
mess for once in a while, and she didn't even have to worry getting
worry about getting lectured.
Are you sure the 'about' need to be in there?
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lectured for it - she was the only one around and this was her very
own way of shamelessly taking advantage of the fact.
her very own way of shamelessly taking advantage of that fact.
I'll consider it.
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Her shamelessness even extended so far, that she'd take a
bath; right now, in the middle of night. She went to the bathroom and
set the tap as hot as it would go, then added a generous amount of
additive, the water taking on an amber hue. Foam started to build
where the stream of water splashed down into the tub. Aya skimmed the
water with her fingers to test the temperature; perfect.
While the water was running, she continued to her room.
Pants, sweater and socks went in one of the two strategically placed
hampers - a desperate attempt to stop her from cluttering the floor
with her dirty clothes. Desperate, but successful, she had to admit.
Aya wriggled out of her 'business outfit' and dropped it onto the
floor. Well, most of the time anyway.
She closed her eyes for a moment and enjoyed the slight breeze
of the air conditioning brushing against her bare skin. It felt good;
a bit cool, maybe, but a pleasant change from the skin tight apparel
she had been wearing for hours. Even with the latest high-tech
fabrics, that always made her itchy.
In the meantime, the tub was full, and the taps automatically
closed; the sound of running water trickled off, and then there was
but silence. Aya opened her eyes again.
and there there was nothing but silence.
Huh?
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She was halfway to the bathroom, when she caught her refection
in the full length mirror in the hallway. Damn, she was still wearing
the necklace. It wasn't as if it would melt in the water, but there
was a good chance that if she didn't take it off now, she wouldn't
before going to bed, and in the morning she'd have to take the bed
apart in order to find it. It wouldn't be the first time.
Once she had put it in its usual place of honour on her
bedside table, Aya went to the bathroom and climbed into the tub. The
heat immediately welled up in her, driving sweat onto her skin, and
her muscles slackened. She leaned back and let her mind wander.
Had her mother taken off the necklace for bathing? She might
have, but Aya wasn't sure. It was so long ago, and she hadn't paid
much attention to it. The necklace was just there, something that her
mother always wore, a part of her. And after her mother had died it
had become a part of her. Even if she didn't have to, she wear it
every day.
she wore it every day.
'she'd wear it every day'
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She did, though. Aya, just like her mother and her mother's
mother and her mother's mother's mother and who knew how many before
them, suffered from a very unique condition, so unique, in fact, that
the doctors didn't even have a name for it. Implants just wouldn't
work, either not activating in the first place, or breaking down
within hours - including the ID implants afforded on every citizen,
ID implants forced on every citizen.
Not exactly. I'm pretty sure 'afford' captures the spirit of the thing.
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shortly after birth. If they could have gotten away with it, they'd
probably rooted the problem out, but since that was not an option,
they had devised an external version of the chip. Hence the necklace.
Oh yes, she really suffered a lot from that. She suffered from
not being able to have any half brewed hardware inside her, and she
suffered from freedom. Others in the not-quite-legal line of business
had to go to great lengths to mask their ID or have it surgically
removed, effectively forcing them underground for as long as they
lived; all she had to do was taking off the necklace. What a terrible
fate for her to bear.
all she had to do was take off the necklace.
What about 'was to take off'?
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Sputtering, Aya woke up. She must have been fallen asleep in the
bathtub. Again. If she kept doing that, she was going to drown one of
these days. She could really do without that.
Aya climbed out of the tub and opened the drain. Shouldn't she
at least feel rested, when she put her life on line for a nap? As it
was, she could barely keep her eyes open. Aya wrapped her bathrobe
tightly around her and went to her room, slumping right away onto her
bed. The very next moment her breath became slow and steady; Aya was
sleeping the sleep of the just.
She will wake up on a wet pillow if she doesn't put a towel around her
head or put a towel around her pillow first :-/
Well, yes, but she doesn't really care. All she want to do it sleep.
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2008-08-04 10:26:41 UTC
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?

Neo
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2008-08-04 13:19:06 UTC
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

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"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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2008-08-05 19:11:14 UTC
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
Is Rain Mynor with an ability to serve drinks and count change?

Neo
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2008-08-06 12:22:45 UTC
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
Is Rain Mynor with an ability to serve drinks and count change?
Hell, no. Big fuzzy ears, rather small... does that ring a bell? Maybe I
should add fuzzy all over, large eyes and a fixation on cheese and
carrots...
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Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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2008-08-06 12:34:58 UTC
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
Is Rain Mynor with an ability to serve drinks and count change?
Hell, no. Big fuzzy ears, rather small... does that ring a bell? Maybe I
should add fuzzy all over, large eyes and a fixation on cheese and
carrots...
how cute !!!!!

'me push mugger'

Neo
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2008-08-06 15:27:03 UTC
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<snip>
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
Is Rain Mynor with an ability to serve drinks and count change?
Hell, no. Big fuzzy ears, rather small... does that ring a bell? Maybe I
should add fuzzy all over, large eyes and a fixation on cheese and
carrots...
how cute !!!!!
'me push mugger'
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the specialists
deal with the idiots. For all his looks and appearance, Rain is
resourceful.
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Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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2008-08-06 19:11:33 UTC
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<snip>
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
Is Rain Mynor with an ability to serve drinks and count change?
Hell, no. Big fuzzy ears, rather small... does that ring a bell? Maybe I
should add fuzzy all over, large eyes and a fixation on cheese and
carrots...
how cute !!!!!
'me push mugger'
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the specialists
deal with the idiots. For all his looks and appearance, Rain is
resourceful.
Let's just hope he doesn't starve himself to death :-/

Neo
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Red Dragon
2008-08-07 01:40:36 UTC
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<snip>
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
Is Rain Mynor with an ability to serve drinks and count change?
Hell, no. Big fuzzy ears, rather small... does that ring a bell? Maybe I
should add fuzzy all over, large eyes and a fixation on cheese and
carrots...
how cute !!!!!
'me push mugger'
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the specialists
deal with the idiots. For all his looks and appearance, Rain is
resourceful.
Let's just hope he doesn't starve himself to death :-/
Neo
I'm sure Rain's not C2 original AI...
Of course, I more had a problem with those ones thinking to themselves
that it might be fun to see what it's like to max out their pain meter
on the cave wall to the right of the incubator.
Neo
2008-08-07 08:05:01 UTC
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<snip>
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
Is Rain Mynor with an ability to serve drinks and count change?
Hell, no. Big fuzzy ears, rather small... does that ring a bell? Maybe I
should add fuzzy all over, large eyes and a fixation on cheese and
carrots...
how cute !!!!!
'me push mugger'
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the specialists
deal with the idiots. For all his looks and appearance, Rain is
resourceful.
Let's just hope he doesn't starve himself to death :-/
Neo
I'm sure Rain's not C2 original AI...
Of course, I more had a problem with those ones thinking to themselves
that it might be fun to see what it's like to max out their pain meter
on the cave wall to the right of the incubator.
Yes, I have a problem with that too. It might have saved all the other
tall buildings in NY so far, but it takes a sick mind not to have moral
problems with torture. And that includes torturing *all* life, even
Grendels! That said, I kind of enjoyed torturing in Bullfrog's Dungeon
Keeper, but those dark mistresses were just too damned sexy!

Neo
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2008-08-07 17:40:57 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-06, illusion
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the specialists
deal with the idiots. For all his looks and appearance, Rain is
resourceful.
Let's just hope he doesn't starve himself to death :-/
Neo
I'm sure Rain's not C2 original AI...
Of course, I more had a problem with those ones thinking to themselves
that it might be fun to see what it's like to max out their pain meter
on the cave wall to the right of the incubator.
Hehe. Yes, they are adorable little masochists.
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"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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2008-08-09 22:46:46 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-06, illusion
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the specialists
deal with the idiots. For all his looks and appearance, Rain is
resourceful.
Let's just hope he doesn't starve himself to death :-/
Neo
I'm sure Rain's not C2 original AI...
Of course, I more had a problem with those ones thinking to themselves
that it might be fun to see what it's like to max out their pain meter
on the cave wall to the right of the incubator.
Hehe. Yes, they are adorable little masochists.
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?

Neo
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Red Dragon
2008-08-10 17:42:29 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-06, illusion
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the
specialists deal with the idiots. For all his looks and
appearance, Rain is resourceful.
Let's just hope he doesn't starve himself to death :-/
Neo
I'm sure Rain's not C2 original AI... Of course, I more had a
problem with those ones thinking to themselves that it might be
fun to see what it's like to max out their pain meter on the cave
wall to the right of the incubator.
Hehe. Yes, they are adorable little masochists.
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to
do bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red
Dragon?
Neo
Only after they were at the wall-ramming for couple of minutes. I was a
pretty cranky teenager...

Of course, those are not games I tended to save. Most of the time I
wanted happy, well-raised norns that, once adults, knew how to take care
of themselves for the most part. Or at least ate the food I put in front
of them when they're 'extremely hungry'

I was a much happier person with Canny Norn AI.
Neo
2008-08-10 17:52:18 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-06, illusion
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the
specialists deal with the idiots. For all his looks and
appearance, Rain is resourceful.
Let's just hope he doesn't starve himself to death :-/
Neo
I'm sure Rain's not C2 original AI... Of course, I more had a
problem with those ones thinking to themselves that it might be fun
to see what it's like to max out their pain meter on the cave
wall to the right of the incubator.
Hehe. Yes, they are adorable little masochists.
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to
do bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Neo
Only after they were at the wall-ramming for couple of minutes. I was a
pretty cranky teenager...
Of course, those are not games I tended to save. Most of the time I
wanted happy, well-raised norns that, once adults, knew how to take care
of themselves for the most part. Or at least ate the food I put in front
of them when they're 'extremely hungry'
I was a much happier person with Canny Norn AI.
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia. Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this
group :-)

But I don't think I ever tortured norns. Maybe spliced them a bit at
most to see what would happen.

Neo
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emmel
2008-08-19 09:19:34 UTC
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia.
How evil.
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this
group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
Post by Neo
But I don't think I ever tortured norns. Maybe spliced them a bit at
most to see what would happen.
A bit... or a bit more... a couple of injections... and before you
realize what you are doing people are calling you Frankenstein. Good
book, BTW.
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2008-08-19 12:21:06 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia.
How evil.
I call it survival of the fittest.

Definitely the norns I thought everything they needed to know have an
advantage there.
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this
group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
All three of us <veg>.
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
But I don't think I ever tortured norns. Maybe spliced them a bit at
most to see what would happen.
A bit... or a bit more... a couple of injections... and before you
realize what you are doing people are calling you Frankenstein. Good
book, BTW.
I call that scientific research. Explore and understand the virtual
world you are in.

Neo
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Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-19 14:31:32 UTC
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia.
How evil.
I call it survival of the fittest.
Definitely the norns I thought everything they needed to know have an
advantage there.
I call it survival of the dark lord's own people, if you don't mind.
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this
group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
All three of us <veg>.
Well, the others seem to have ascended already. Descended. Whatever.
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
But I don't think I ever tortured norns. Maybe spliced them a bit at
most to see what would happen.
A bit... or a bit more... a couple of injections... and before you
realize what you are doing people are calling you Frankenstein. Good
book, BTW.
I call that scientific research. Explore and understand the virtual
world you are in.
Tell that the ethics commission. They always get so cranky when you use
people like lab rats. Did I just say people? Oops.
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2008-08-19 15:08:49 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia.
How evil.
I call it survival of the fittest.
Definitely the norns I thought everything they needed to know have an
advantage there.
I call it survival of the dark lord's own people, if you don't mind.
Since it were their siblings getting killed out there in the wild, I
don't see how that is bad :-)
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this
group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
All three of us <veg>.
Well, the others seem to have ascended already. Descended. Whatever.
Gone to heaven you mean?
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
But I don't think I ever tortured norns. Maybe spliced them a bit at
most to see what would happen.
A bit... or a bit more... a couple of injections... and before you
realize what you are doing people are calling you Frankenstein. Good
book, BTW.
I call that scientific research. Explore and understand the virtual
world you are in.
Tell that the ethics commission. They always get so cranky when you use
people like lab rats. Did I just say people? Oops.
At least I didn't study them by teaching them how to run head first into
a solid wall!

Neo
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Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-19 22:45:49 UTC
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia.
How evil.
I call it survival of the fittest.
Definitely the norns I thought everything they needed to know have an
advantage there.
I call it survival of the dark lord's own people, if you don't mind.
Since it were their siblings getting killed out there in the wild, I
don't see how that is bad :-)
You might want an attitude check...
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this
group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
All three of us <veg>.
Well, the others seem to have ascended already. Descended. Whatever.
Gone to heaven you mean?
More like disappeared from the radar.
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
But I don't think I ever tortured norns. Maybe spliced them a bit at
most to see what would happen.
A bit... or a bit more... a couple of injections... and before you
realize what you are doing people are calling you Frankenstein. Good
book, BTW.
I call that scientific research. Explore and understand the virtual
world you are in.
Tell that the ethics commission. They always get so cranky when you use
people like lab rats. Did I just say people? Oops.
At least I didn't study them by teaching them how to run head first into
a solid wall!
As if they couldn't figure that out on their own...
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

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"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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2008-08-21 10:54:07 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia.
How evil.
I call it survival of the fittest.
Definitely the norns I thought everything they needed to know have an
advantage there.
I call it survival of the dark lord's own people, if you don't mind.
Since it were their siblings getting killed out there in the wild, I
don't see how that is bad :-)
You might want an attitude check...
You call it survival of the dark lord's own people.

I point out that it are the dark lord's own people (offspring) getting
killed in the line of duty. They are heroes! (like Laika).
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this
group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
All three of us <veg>.
Well, the others seem to have ascended already. Descended. Whatever.
Gone to heaven you mean?
More like disappeared from the radar.
They all moved to MSN I guess...
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
But I don't think I ever tortured norns. Maybe spliced them a bit at
most to see what would happen.
A bit... or a bit more... a couple of injections... and before you
realize what you are doing people are calling you Frankenstein. Good
book, BTW.
I call that scientific research. Explore and understand the virtual
world you are in.
Tell that the ethics commission. They always get so cranky when you use
people like lab rats. Did I just say people? Oops.
At least I didn't study them by teaching them how to run head first into
a solid wall!
As if they couldn't figure that out on their own...
Well, if you keep saying 'LEFT' to them and rewarding them, why are you
surprised they bump into walls?

Neo
--
Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-21 11:45:01 UTC
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia.
How evil.
I call it survival of the fittest.
Definitely the norns I thought everything they needed to know have an
advantage there.
I call it survival of the dark lord's own people, if you don't mind.
Since it were their siblings getting killed out there in the wild, I
don't see how that is bad :-)
You might want an attitude check...
You call it survival of the dark lord's own people.
So?
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people (offspring) getting
killed in the line of duty. They are heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better, you know.
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this
group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
All three of us <veg>.
Well, the others seem to have ascended already. Descended. Whatever.
Gone to heaven you mean?
More like disappeared from the radar.
They all moved to MSN I guess...
Yikes!
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
Post by Neo
But I don't think I ever tortured norns. Maybe spliced them a bit at
most to see what would happen.
A bit... or a bit more... a couple of injections... and before you
realize what you are doing people are calling you Frankenstein. Good
book, BTW.
I call that scientific research. Explore and understand the virtual
world you are in.
Tell that the ethics commission. They always get so cranky when you use
people like lab rats. Did I just say people? Oops.
At least I didn't study them by teaching them how to run head first into
a solid wall!
As if they couldn't figure that out on their own...
Well, if you keep saying 'LEFT' to them and rewarding them, why are you
surprised they bump into walls?
I refuse to be surprised.
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"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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Neo
2008-08-21 11:57:18 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with canny
norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and maturity,
it was time for them to explore the world. And a dangerous world it was!
There are all kinds of things that can hurt them outside, so I just kept
the clever ones in the starting chamber to teach lots and lots of
newborns. The newborns were dispensable enough to travel to other
sections of Albia.
How evil.
I call it survival of the fittest.
Definitely the norns I thought everything they needed to know have an
advantage there.
I call it survival of the dark lord's own people, if you don't mind.
Since it were their siblings getting killed out there in the wild, I
don't see how that is bad :-)
You might want an attitude check...
You call it survival of the dark lord's own people.
So?
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people (offspring) getting
killed in the line of duty. They are heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better, you know.
Yeah, shooting of monkeys into space is much more ethical ;-)

Neo
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emmel
2008-08-22 08:20:23 UTC
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people (offspring) getting
killed in the line of duty. They are heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better, you know.
Yeah, shooting of monkeys into space is much more ethical ;-)
If they volunteered for it... Besides, human are actually apes and not
monkeys. <d&rlh>
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

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"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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Neo
2008-08-22 14:24:48 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people (offspring) getting
killed in the line of duty. They are heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better, you know.
Yeah, shooting of monkeys into space is much more ethical ;-)
If they volunteered for it... Besides, human are actually apes and not
monkeys. <d&rlh>
Canny monkeys ;-D

Neo
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Everything that has a beginning has an end.
emmel
2008-08-22 15:56:31 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-22, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people (offspring) getting
killed in the line of duty. They are heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better, you know.
Yeah, shooting of monkeys into space is much more ethical ;-)
If they volunteered for it... Besides, human are actually apes and not
monkeys. <d&rlh>
Canny monkeys ;-D
Apes.
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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Red Dragon
2008-08-22 15:41:54 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people (offspring) getting
killed in the line of duty. They are heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better, you know.
Yeah, shooting of monkeys into space is much more ethical ;-)
If they volunteered for it... Besides, human are actually apes and not
monkeys. <d&rlh>
"Crested Savannah Apes" has always been my internal word for humans.
emmel
2008-08-22 15:57:20 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-22, illusion
Post by Red Dragon
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people (offspring) getting
killed in the line of duty. They are heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better, you know.
Yeah, shooting of monkeys into space is much more ethical ;-)
If they volunteered for it... Besides, human are actually apes and not
monkeys. <d&rlh>
"Crested Savannah Apes" has always been my internal word for humans.
Nice one. Though 'crested'? More like 'fallen', if you ask me.
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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2008-08-22 22:10:28 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-22, illusion
Post by Red Dragon
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people
(offspring) getting killed in the line of duty. They are
heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better,
you know.
Yeah, shooting of monkeys into space is much more ethical ;-)
If they volunteered for it... Besides, human are actually apes
and not monkeys. <d&rlh>
"Crested Savannah Apes" has always been my internal word for
humans.
Nice one. Though 'crested'? More like 'fallen', if you ask me.
With 'crested,' I refer to the bizarre tuft of hair on the top of the
human head. Like those Chinese Crested dogs that only have hair on their
heads.
emmel
2008-08-24 09:27:18 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-22, illusion
Post by Red Dragon
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-22, illusion
Post by Red Dragon
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
I point out that it are the dark lord's own people
(offspring) getting killed in the line of duty. They are
heroes! (like Laika).
Poor dog. And that doesn't exactly make things any better, you know.
Yeah, shooting of monkeys into space is much more ethical ;-)
If they volunteered for it... Besides, human are actually apes
and not monkeys. <d&rlh>
"Crested Savannah Apes" has always been my internal word for
humans.
Nice one. Though 'crested'? More like 'fallen', if you ask me.
With 'crested,' I refer to the bizarre tuft of hair on the top of the
human head. Like those Chinese Crested dogs that only have hair on their
heads.
Oh. That makes sense, of course.
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"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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2008-08-19 14:42:57 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with
canny norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and
maturity, it was time for them to explore the world. And a
dangerous world it was! There are all kinds of things that can hurt
them outside, so I just kept the clever ones in the starting
chamber to teach lots and lots of newborns. The newborns were
dispensable enough to travel to other sections of Albia.
How evil.
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
I still play... ::pouty lip::

Come to think of it, I should go back to those norn sprites on which I
started working. C3 norns take way too many sprites.
Neo
2008-08-19 15:11:49 UTC
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Post by Red Dragon
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-10, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with
canny norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and
maturity, it was time for them to explore the world. And a
dangerous world it was! There are all kinds of things that can hurt
them outside, so I just kept the clever ones in the starting
chamber to teach lots and lots of newborns. The newborns were
dispensable enough to travel to other sections of Albia.
How evil.
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
Come to think of it, I should go back to those norn sprites on which I
started working. C3 norns take way too many sprites.
I have C3 on my shelve, but I never installed it. I kept hearing they
were unexpressive norns :-/

My girlfriend plays Creatures Village though! Seems she has a lot of
eggs already :-)


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emmel
2008-08-19 22:44:14 UTC
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Post by Neo
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And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Problem I had with the game (I didn't start my first batch with
canny norns) is that once you carefully nurtured them to wisdom and
maturity, it was time for them to explore the world. And a
dangerous world it was! There are all kinds of things that can hurt
them outside, so I just kept the clever ones in the starting
chamber to teach lots and lots of newborns. The newborns were
dispensable enough to travel to other sections of Albia.
How evil.
Post by Neo
Then I kind of lost interest and ended up in this group :-)
Oh, yes, we all get that, I think.
Come to think of it, I should go back to those norn sprites on which I
started working. C3 norns take way too many sprites.
I have C3 on my shelve, but I never installed it. I kept hearing they
were unexpressive norns :-/
Yes, but they released a fixed genome later on, aptly called 'expressive
eggs'.
Post by Neo
My girlfriend plays Creatures Village though! Seems she has a lot of
eggs already :-)
It was somewhat... annoying. Didn't have the console, and I didn't
manage to get the C3 one to work. Made me feel so powerless...
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"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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2008-08-19 09:16:01 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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Neo
2008-08-19 12:24:42 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-09, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
I can't remember mine did that. The original norns I had died of
starvation or drowning mostly. The canny norns of learning them to
operate a lander. Guess their brains aren't cut out to be a pilot ::joke::

Neo
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emmel
2008-08-19 14:32:33 UTC
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-09, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
I can't remember mine did that. The original norns I had died of
starvation or drowning mostly. The canny norns of learning them to
I don't get it.
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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Neo
2008-08-19 15:14:11 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-09, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
I can't remember mine did that. The original norns I had died of
starvation or drowning mostly. The canny norns of learning them to
I don't get it.
Pushing UP and DOWN in the lander that they can manage. But I think they
never played that old lander game in the computer prehistory. (In fact,
the lander made me decide it was too dangerous for them to be out
there).

Neo
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emmel
2008-08-19 22:46:29 UTC
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Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-09, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
I can't remember mine did that. The original norns I had died of
starvation or drowning mostly. The canny norns of learning them to
I don't get it.
Pushing UP and DOWN in the lander that they can manage. But I think they
never played that old lander game in the computer prehistory. (In fact,
the lander made me decide it was too dangerous for them to be out
there).
I didn't get the *joke*.
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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Neo
2008-08-21 11:01:33 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-09, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
I can't remember mine did that. The original norns I had died of
starvation or drowning mostly. The canny norns of learning them to
I don't get it.
Pushing UP and DOWN in the lander that they can manage. But I think they
never played that old lander game in the computer prehistory. (In fact,
the lander made me decide it was too dangerous for them to be out
there).
I didn't get the *joke*.
If a norn could lift off, fly where it wanted to go and then land again.
That would be pretty impressive for a norn wouldn't it?

It would be like they would recite the complete works of Shakespeare
while you were away from your computer.

'Pretty Fucking Amazing!'

Like Sheep that would plan to take over the world while keeping us
fooled!

That's the joke. (Unless you really fear sheep will raid your home at
midnight).

Neo
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emmel
2008-08-21 11:47:39 UTC
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Post by Neo
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And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-09, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
I can't remember mine did that. The original norns I had died of
starvation or drowning mostly. The canny norns of learning them to
I don't get it.
Pushing UP and DOWN in the lander that they can manage. But I think they
never played that old lander game in the computer prehistory. (In fact,
the lander made me decide it was too dangerous for them to be out
there).
I didn't get the *joke*.
If a norn could lift off, fly where it wanted to go and then land again.
That would be pretty impressive for a norn wouldn't it?
Yes...
Post by Neo
It would be like they would recite the complete works of Shakespeare
while you were away from your computer.
Oh, I'm sure they'd do that... if I lend them a copy in the first place.
Post by Neo
'Pretty Fucking Amazing!'
Like Sheep that would plan to take over the world while keeping us
fooled!
Well...
Post by Neo
That's the joke. (Unless you really fear sheep will raid your home at
midnight).
Not exactly... there aren't as many sheep around here...
Actually I thought there was an elaborate word joke involved in the
brain/cut out part. I guess I was wrong.
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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Neo
2008-08-21 11:58:28 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-09, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
I can't remember mine did that. The original norns I had died of
starvation or drowning mostly. The canny norns of learning them to
I don't get it.
Pushing UP and DOWN in the lander that they can manage. But I think they
never played that old lander game in the computer prehistory. (In fact,
the lander made me decide it was too dangerous for them to be out
there).
I didn't get the *joke*.
If a norn could lift off, fly where it wanted to go and then land again.
That would be pretty impressive for a norn wouldn't it?
Yes...
Post by Neo
It would be like they would recite the complete works of Shakespeare
while you were away from your computer.
Oh, I'm sure they'd do that... if I lend them a copy in the first place.
Post by Neo
'Pretty Fucking Amazing!'
Like Sheep that would plan to take over the world while keeping us
fooled!
Well...
Post by Neo
That's the joke. (Unless you really fear sheep will raid your home at
midnight).
Not exactly... there aren't as many sheep around here...
Actually I thought there was an elaborate word joke involved in the
brain/cut out part. I guess I was wrong.
How would that make them better pilots?

Neo
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emmel
2008-08-22 08:25:20 UTC
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And when it was 2008-08-21, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-19, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-09, illusion
Post by Neo
Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-07, illusion
Why would a C2 norn do that unless it was conditioned by the owner to do
bad things? You're not torturing artificial life are you Red Dragon?
Because it's a C2 norn?
I can't remember mine did that. The original norns I had died of
starvation or drowning mostly. The canny norns of learning them to
I don't get it.
Pushing UP and DOWN in the lander that they can manage. But I think they
never played that old lander game in the computer prehistory. (In fact,
the lander made me decide it was too dangerous for them to be out
there).
I didn't get the *joke*.
If a norn could lift off, fly where it wanted to go and then land again.
That would be pretty impressive for a norn wouldn't it?
Yes...
Post by Neo
It would be like they would recite the complete works of Shakespeare
while you were away from your computer.
Oh, I'm sure they'd do that... if I lend them a copy in the first place.
Post by Neo
'Pretty Fucking Amazing!'
Like Sheep that would plan to take over the world while keeping us
fooled!
Well...
Post by Neo
That's the joke. (Unless you really fear sheep will raid your home at
midnight).
Not exactly... there aren't as many sheep around here...
Actually I thought there was an elaborate word joke involved in the
brain/cut out part. I guess I was wrong.
How would that make them better pilots?
That's what I couldn't figure it out, you know.

On different notes: Spellcheck up and running. Now I only have to deal
with all the stuff it tells it is wrong :-(
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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emmel
2008-08-07 17:39:59 UTC
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Post by emmel
And when it was 2008-08-06, illusion
Post by Neo
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And when it was 2008-08-05, illusion
Post by Neo
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And when it was 2008-08-04, illusion
Post by Neo
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And when it was 2008-08-01, illusion
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'Peace and carrots.' he greeted her cheerfully, with what he
claimed to be the traditional phrase of his home world.
'Peace and carrots, Rain.' Aya replied, her voice lowered to a
point where it was just loud enough for his big, fuzzy ears to pick
up. No point in concealing your face, when everyone can hear you.
I somehow expected a reaction to this... Oh well.
Is it an official AGC greeting that I am too young to know about?
It seems so. Anyway, the description of Rain should have been a dead
giveaway.
Is Rain Mynor with an ability to serve drinks and count change?
Hell, no. Big fuzzy ears, rather small... does that ring a bell? Maybe I
should add fuzzy all over, large eyes and a fixation on cheese and
carrots...
how cute !!!!!
'me push mugger'
Yeah, exactly. Well, more like 'me push phone' - let the specialists
deal with the idiots. For all his looks and appearance, Rain is
resourceful.
Let's just hope he doesn't starve himself to death :-/
Well, we'll see about that.
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"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... :)
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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